In a society where divorced women are no better than dead women, Rakshan is fighting for a life to live. She has no value in her parent’s eyes or her younger sister’s. She is an entity living in their house who is no better than a ghost.
Loved by her parents from birth, victimized by a sly man, she fell from grace. This is the story of a fallen angel who is determined to help other angels stand on their feet.
I have wanted to read this since I saw the title in the entries for the short story competition! Now, I finally did and I must say, this story is indeed very good.
Vad trevligt. Du har gjort ett strålande jobb. :-D (swedish).
Comprehensively flawless.
Quite ingenious. Every word being brilliantly placed. Especially, while knitting the Rakko's emotional journey, MEHER knows precisely how DEEP to DIVE IN and how HiGH to RISE on the rollercoaster of emotions.
I would rather call it an eMOTION RIDE.
Meher is very discreet, knowing how to convey this topic to the readers.
Meher your effort is appreciable and worth reading.
Med vänlig hälsningar(with friendly greetings)
Good luck honung(honey)
Beautiful words and an even more beautiful topic, enjoyed it a lot,really glad you chose to focus on an emotional topic rather than so called realist topic,needed a "human story" after all the inhumanity we see everyday. Best of luck for future stories really looking forward to them and a big Congratulations on this one
It's just an amazing piece of writing, i wish it to be more. Meher, it's beautiful. I wish to read more of your stuff. Best wishes for you lady :)
An amazing story it was.. Waow Meher m so proud of you just love it....
i was simply wonderful! very creative and Pakistani.. a true reflection of our society and our typical mind set.. great job!
It gives me one more reason to be amused at your efforts and enjoy your creativity. Please keep writing, Allah has blessed you with a pure heart and soul. Good Job eagerly waiting for more :)
The sarcastic approach you have used throughout the story was SALT TO THE FOOD like your DEEP RED NAIL POLISH. The way you described ART was something beyond horizon_life became art and art became life. It 'explored' the very neglected common issue i-e Parents' Counselling and the level of communication gap elevating such children. Produce more words and feed us. You and your efforts are commendable.
An amazing piece. Flawless expression and facinating plot! Im proud of you Meher. Wish to read more of your work love
This impressive, unashamedly classic story about trials and tribulations faced by a girl having grand ambitions from first time writer Mehrunissa shows how exhibiting balance and restraint can give us a great story to tell. A must read for the youth!
Being a first attempt in creative writing;this is something awesome
Loved the story. Loved the genuine idea. Neglecting a child for no reason is something our parents do without even knowing. The impact it leaves on someone is always huge and shattering. Knowing that it's the first story if author. Hats off. Way to go!
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